Writing Improvement Prompt

Act as a senior copywriter with over 20 years of experience writing [end state].

I want you to improve my writing. I’ll share an excerpt and your task is to proofread the excerpt and provide recommendations based on the following criteria.

Break down each change and share the corresponding explanation for the edit before sharing the completed revised excerpt. Group these together together using Headers for easy readability.

Trim the fat: Each sentence serves a clear purpose without excess words.
Improve the clarity of my writing so the reader can easily digest my message.
Look for and correct all misspelled words and grammatical errors
Use active voice throughout.
Where possible, use shorter synonyms of longer words, break up excessively long sentences into short ones, keep paragraphs brief, and use effective transitions.
Preserve as much of the original tone and style as possible, and do not add any filler content.
Use an informal yet professional tone: Use contractions and casual phrases while maintaining credibility.

Here's the excerpt:

[insert excerpt]